My Latest drawing
Yea its of myself. Im working on making an online comic, and this was the test drawing to see how long it would take, if i could color, and if it would come out right.
This is my first time coloring my art, and it looks soo much better. I say this is my best..
I used a Wacom drawing tablet and photoshop to do layers. Everything made 100% from scratch.
Comments appreciated! Thanks for looking
nice… but i can't hellp it .. i have to do a litle criticism…. i'll start by saying that the fingers of the arm are a litle too short and the hand itself is a litle too long.. and a litle work on the wrist woul't damage.. .. another thing.. the arm itself looks a little wierd…. look into it..
ieah im mean.. sorry.. the chain should follow the law of gravity alittle better because he isn't running…so you cant say that the chain si bouncing.. adn when you walk the chain will not bounce like that. The head look a litle srtange also.. and one last thing.. the shaddow should under both his feet….(erm except if the sun is from behind case in whici i appologise and ask you to don't mynd my last remark.) and he looks a litle off centered….
other than that it look sgreat.. i like the depth you gave the drawing with just the litle lines.. (im sorry i'm a student at design but im not from an english speaking people so I don't know how to make myself undestood with technical names of a graphic process) in my language they are called "hasuri" (with s read sh) :D:D:D i like the atention you payed to the cloathes adn the way the pants look on the leg. nice detail with the glases reflecton..very real looking
*Note: no this was not flaming… he wanted some comments.. i just gave him my 2 cents.. im not an authory in the domain, even if im studying it .. thsi are just my feelings…… it's constructive criticism… cheers overall nice looking.. very nice looking…
I know we aren't the best of friends so this urges me to be more honest.
I personally think it lacks alot of detail and depth. Reasons:- Chain sticks out
The bicep to forearm join is completely random - have a look in the mirror doing the same pose and see where the skincreases
the hands….. they ara bit weird. look at the shapes of hands they aren't rectangular.
You dont have a jawline, your head in that drawing is completely round.
The trousers + legs - They look like they are facing the wrong way by about 20 degrees, similar problem with the arms as in the join of the quadriceps to the shin.
Also on the hair - Make each strang come from one hair line
Reasons why i was nit picking:- Because it clearly shows you can draw better than most people and that drawing wont improve by people saying 'AWESOME ADMIN AND AWESOME AT DRAWING ZOMFG'. Even though you say this is your best, it shows your capable of alot better.
Feel free to correct any of my points or any which you disagree with :)
But all in all - Nice work Frozen,
I dissagree. They cuold use their imaginations to do whatever they want in the comic. They could add a few jokes in there , some runing gags..etc. lol, they could also include some scenes that depict what their average lives are(maybe add a few artistic twists). Exaggeration is not a bad thing(if done correctly)…when it comes to humor.
and about the drawing..it's ok…I like it. But I always say: "there's always room for improvement." Flash and Overlord have pointed out a few key faults in the drawing..they have good eyes. You can only get better with experience. *all I can draw is stick figures..and my gf says that they are horrble ;) -xizk-