Hack Rap
Hey, I'm into writing poetry, and rapping, I like to rhyme basically. I for some reason thought it would be cool to write a rap about hacking. Here's what I quickly through together:
People dont get it we're here for your protection it aint about the trojan horses and undetection hackers keep the net free from skiddies and noobs launching DoS attacks in return we get the Secret service and the feds on our backs there are the blackhats who break into systems and dont hide their tracks the reason behind stereotyping whenever someone says 'that dude hacks' The media, they blow the facts way out of proportion Giving hackers a real bad name after the truth's distortion
If you guys like it I'll make more.
this, to the sound of TOOL or RATM
wake up, this is no time for a nap net nuetrality, yes, its under attack! electronic sitins, yo, we gotta take it back cause the feds, they actions lack dat finesse that accompanies a ritous hack
the media, it spits upon hackers nothing but teenage slackers the masses, they follow and in the fear of hackers wallow they accept the shackels they borrow from the corporations, who show no sorrow.
so let us learn the lessons of thoreau [pronounced with a new england accent: THOR-oh] and learn all of his lessons, then go.. this evil thing we must overthrow!
shh, the mentor speaks. With his words, up rise the weak Information, it is it's freedom that they seek soon, very soon, that information will leak
Not bad darkstock :) I added to mine too:
People dont get it we're here for your protection it aint about the trojan horses and undetection hackers keep the net free from skiddies and noobs launching DoS attacks in return we get the Secret service and the feds on our backs there are the blackhats who break into systems and dont hide their tracks the reason behind stereotyping whenever someone says 'that dude hacks' The media, they blow the facts way out of proportion Giving hackers a real bad name after the truth's distortion
I've come across sites who think they're the shit with their IP trackers Running around with loggers and calling themselves hackers If they only knew the true meaning of what they're trying to be There wouldn't be the need for overpriced anti-hack security When will they wake up and realize this isn't a game And quit doing stupid shit for their fifteen minutes of fame
I know a guy named Mr_Cheese It's a shame the media can't see what he sees If you're against people attaining knowledge well thats just a shame So then why have you spent your entire life doing the same
To all you wannabe hackers don't get discouraged just wait and learn The ability to hack aint something you buy, but something you earn What I'm saying is hacking doesnt get handed to you, its not found in a book What you do with the knowledge is up to you, just don't become a crook
darkstock wrote: this, to the sound of TOOL or RATM
wake up, this is no time for a nap net nuetrality, yes, its under attack! electronic sitins, yo, we gotta take it back cause the feds, they actions lack dat finesse that accompanies a ritous hack
the media, it spits upon hackers nothing but teenage slackers the masses, they follow and in the fear of hackers wallow they accept the shackels they borrow from the corporations, who show no sorrow.
so let us learn the lessons of thoreau [pronounced with a new england accent: THOR-oh] and learn all of his lessons, then go.. this evil thing we must overthrow!
shh, the mentor speaks. With his words, up rise the weak Information, it is it's freedom that they seek soon, very soon, that information will leak
Sounds like something that should have been in the "Hackers" movie.
Whoa…I have one!!!! Here goes…
Yo, Ima bout to tell yall a story No, it aint violent or gory Its a lil sometin call hackin hacking aint bout stealin its bout learnin
So yall wanna hack You wann learn how to hack Well dont try to break yalls back It real easy Aint no pain sweetie Its all bout learnin Stop with the table turnin
All yall gotta know is what you want If yall dont then you better go back to vermont You gotta be prepared Preparation aint notin to be scared Its just learnin Learnins hackin….. Thats all yall need to know.
Wow I suck….But I guess it has some meaning:happy:
nights_shadow wrote: Sounds like something that should have been in the "Hackers" movie.
While the technology is total BS in hackers, the personification of the BBS-era underground is actually pretty accurate in many ways. They even quote the mentor's manifesto in it. I'm not sure if you meant that comment in a good way, a bad was or as just an observation.
And net neutrality wasn't an issue in those days. unfortunately, it is now. Other than that, yeah… it sounds like something you'd here cereal or ikon saying. I think I got those names right
hey, tis nice, but try a bit of alliteration and rhythm: a lot of what a rhyme is is rhythm - try to match syllables in an A, ABA, AABAABBA or similar pattern :) Well, that's my 2 cents of constructive criticism. You did a good job or is in stanza 1-2, but 3 sorta lost the rhythm IMHO, but then, I wouldn't be the one presenting it, so I wouldn't be able to know for sure, depending on the use of pauses and such
Well I don't care much for the rhyme scheme you have used.
It is amatueresque!
Instead of the rhyming words being on the end of every sentance.
Try varying them over more.
For example these:-
"I shatter the anatomy so rapidly you actually have to be carried back to thee infurmery"
or
"Try and imagine a javelin travelling through your fucking abdomen and having your flesh unravelling"
[edit] I didn't make that up! myspace.com/5starruk [/edit]
OK im not much good but its holidays and all my girlfriend is in fiji so i decided to see how crap i am. Here is mine please tell me everywhere to improve or should i just delete the thing entirely but please dont be too harsh remember i aint very good Were misunderstood we just want to do good Ya all of you are right we are misunderstood But we are good to tha core We aint hardcore We just like knowledge You know I just want more… more, more, more All we want is for people to know that their computers are on show.
Those holes in the OS They have a specific prowess. Aint that terrific Just like I said they have the ability To rip you down and raise up to put on that digital crown. Were out there Were guardians Were Anglican, Arabian and many many more Were everywhere Our abilities might give u a scare
We could raise that hair on tha back of the neck You better hit the deck Where coming The media makes you think were all bad You know what, the media is a whole bunch of fags You wanna identify us from good and bad then look to our heads where you’ll always see a hat This is what the feds should do Upon our head theres always a hat you know it either black, white or gray That might sounds gay but hey we might be peaceful That don’t mean we cant be mean too.
Pheonix wrote: hey, don't make fun of vermont if it wasn't for us you wouldn't have good Maple Syrup, Ice Cream, and Cabot cheese. not that I like syrup but Vermont desearves respect oh yeah…nice 'rhyming stuff' added
I had one about headlong in halo, but that won't appeal to this group…
Lol I'm canadian too.
SANTA wrote: OK im not much good but its holidays and all my girlfriend is in fiji so i decided to see how crap i am. Here is mine please tell me everywhere to improve or should i just delete the thing entirely but please dont be too harsh remember i aint very good Were misunderstood we just want to do good Ya all of you are right we are misunderstood But we are good to tha core We aint hardcore We just like knowledge You know I just want more… more, more, more All we want is for people to know that their computers are on show.
Those holes in the OS They have a specific prowess. Aint that terrific Just like I said they have the ability To rip you down and raise up to put on that digital crown. Were out there Were guardians Were Anglican, Arabian and many many more Were everywhere Our abilities might give u a scare
We could raise that hair on tha back of the neck You better hit the deck Where coming The media makes you think were all bad You know what, the media is a whole bunch of fags You wanna identify us from good and bad then look to our heads where you’ll always see a hat This is what the feds should do Upon our head theres always a hat you know it either black, white or gray That might sounds gay but hey we might be peaceful That don’t mean we cant be mean too.
I have read political manifesto's that had a better rhyme scheme.
That's not being harsh, it's being fair.