My music

I've been working on my music for awhile now and I have posted a few of them, so just out of curiosity, will some of you please listen to them and comment.

http://www.myspace.com/streahhearts

Don't like it.

Sorry :(

care to elaborate?

yours31f wrote: care to elaborate?

Sure.

Consider this; the music I listen to is carefully composed, harmonic sounds walk hand-in-hand, as the moon lights up the evening sky, a river bends to accommodate my aesthetic pleasure.

Your music sounds like fierce tetrominoes, falling down on Earth, not only blocking my view but also destroying everything in their path.

It lacks harmony, gentleness and manners. Where is it's path? Where does the river flow? What does it create?

All I'm trying to say is; it sounds like you didn't consider the listening experience. Where's the magic? The fun? How can I enjoy these mere vibrations?

I can't :(.

thank you for the insight.

yours31f wrote: thank you for the insight.

Don't worry, I'm a huge Tetris fan. If anyone understands your work, it is I.

I agree with spy, although he said it in a different way than I was thinking. It sounds like you arn't even trying. Gets some fuckin emotion in your life (not the boy loves girl stuff, but stuff that makes you think), and work your music around that.

<offtopic>Nice half-naked shower photos (second myspace profile). "If you love someone and she says she loves you but she dates someone else, what does it mean?" Why would you link stuff like that to hbh, or post it at all? Work on the ol' phone skillz.

PS, try some web dev work. They get paid so much for the simplest things, and then you don't have to work your "boring night shift".<offtopic>

Its really not that bad, I mean its not like hes making it big time or anything. I seems more like just having fun.

what did you use to make it? :right:

I was overlooking some of the other posts and I just wanted to say, and this can apply to almost anything, we all started somewhere right? :)

The best feedback is always a negative one.

Moss wrote: I was overlooking some of the other posts and I just wanted to say, and this can apply to almost anything, we all started somewhere right? :)

The best feedback is always a negative one.

Seriously, fuck you. GTFO.

maug wrote: I agree with spy, although he said it in a different way than I was thinking. It sounds like you arn't even trying. Gets some fuckin emotion in your life (not the boy loves girl stuff, but stuff that makes you think), and work your music around that. agreed

maug wrote: <offtopic>Nice half-naked shower photos (second myspace profile). "If you love someone and she says she loves you but she dates someone else, what does it mean?" Why would you link stuff like that to hbh, or post it at all? Work on the ol' phone skillz. Lol the pic was taken by my gf

maug wrote: PS, try some web dev work. They get paid so much for the simplest things, and then you don't have to work your "boring night shift".<offtopic>

i have and made $200 for 4 hours of work

spyware wrote: [quote]Moss wrote: I was overlooking some of the other posts and I just wanted to say, and this can apply to almost anything, we all started somewhere right? :)

The best feedback is always a negative one.

Seriously, fuck you. GTFO.[/quote]

…? Care to elaborate on that?!?

Moss wrote: [quote]spyware wrote: [quote]Moss wrote: I was overlooking some of the other posts and I just wanted to say, and this can apply to almost anything, we all started somewhere right? :)

The best feedback is always a negative one.

Seriously, fuck you. GTFO.[/quote]

…? Care to elaborate on that?!?[/quote]

Well, my problem is that you're a sound bite. You don't actually have opinions yet, you just quote funny things and act stupid.

EDIT: you said you like negative feedback? That's awesome, me too.

edit2: @ yours3lf: nice. Think of all those poor hookers getting stds. If only they had been able to learn basic xhtml and css…:(

maug wrote: [quote]Moss wrote: [quote]spyware wrote: [quote]Moss wrote: I was overlooking some of the other posts and I just wanted to say, and this can apply to almost anything, we all started somewhere right? :)

The best feedback is always a negative one.

Seriously, fuck you. GTFO.[/quote]

…? Care to elaborate on that?!?[/quote]

Well, my problem is that you're a sound bite. You don't actually have opinions yet, you just quote funny things and act stupid.

EDIT: you said you like negative feedback? That's awesome, me too.

edit2: @ yours3lf: nice. Think of all those poor hookers getting stds. If only they had been able to learn basic xhtml and css…:([/quote]

Ok I see where you guys are coming from and i guess i need improvement. I think the least you can do is help me along instead of telling me to fuck off and GTFO.

Sure. In general, the best advice I could give is always stay productive. If you feel productive then keep going until you actually are productive; if people say you are productive, then keep going until you feel you are productive.

If you spend time around this community, you'll fit in with no problem. Some of it is vocabulary, some of it is knowing where things are, some of it is a good, strong mindset ^^, some of it you have to find.

PS: some people (like me) are foul mouthed because it gets a funny reaction. doesn't mean shit to me, someone else cares too much, it brings balance =)

<back on topic> any advice for me?

I'm pretty much on the same boat as spyware. It's just too clearly some random sounds put together, no layering that I could tell, it was kinda just…bleh :xx:

yours31f wrote: <back on topic> any advice for me?

buy a fortune cookie.

and check out these 2 bands. http://www.myspace.com/agalloch local band (well for me). I said work your music around an emotion, black metal works around terror. If you don't like it, check out the nature/folk music from their top friends.

http://www.myspace.com/65propaganda much more new wave/ alternative. Like your music, these guys don't really have vocals very often, but they make it work.

Do you do any vocal work? Microphones are cheap =) I think the people here just want something they can focus on in your music.

I have done 5 songs , so which one sounds the best, and which one should I try to work towards? (trance house raver?)

I'm about to head out if you were asking me. But it's your music. You should know what it is already.